Unexplainable Thoughts - Comments, page 2

RebeccaT (100)

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Aww I love the ending

August 8th, 2012 at 11:38pm

error error (100)

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This is amazing so far :3 I can't wait for the next update you do.

August 8th, 2012 at 05:47pm

fearless-forever (100)

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Hmm all I can say is that if Finn tries rto make a move on Ver, the gloves are coming off...

August 7th, 2012 at 07:39pm

MerciPorLeVenin (100)

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loved it!

August 7th, 2012 at 09:27am

M.o.n.s.t.e.r. (100)

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Hooked!! I love this story it is a one of a kind!(:

July 31st, 2012 at 07:57am

fearless-forever (100)

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Hmmmm I wonder if Finn will try to steal Ver away?

July 29th, 2012 at 03:23am

whoathere (100)

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Yay! Finn the warlock! I sense drama coming upppp. I love Laurence, lol. I found his almost-jealously kinda funny.

July 26th, 2012 at 06:06am

MerciPorLeVenin (100)

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OMG LOVE!!!!

July 26th, 2012 at 04:56am

whoathere (100)

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Another chapter pleaaaase?
This was great :D
Finn seems sweet but random. Is he supernatural too? At first I thought he was James..

July 20th, 2012 at 12:21am

fearless-forever (100)

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Hmmmm Finn seems nice, but I think there's something off about him... Or maybe it's just me. :D

July 14th, 2012 at 06:04pm

MerciPorLeVenin (100)

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What the monkey face chicken feather!!!!!!!

July 14th, 2012 at 08:29am

MerciPorLeVenin (100)

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I HAVE HAVE HAVE HAVE TO HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER I'M DYING... it's like one in the morning and I can't laugh our make ANY noise... do you know how hard that is with a story this amazing? subscribed and waiting!

June 25th, 2012 at 09:54am

whoathere (100)

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I think James will be back and that I hate him..lol
Missy is great. I like her spunk, haha.
I love Ver and Laurence. They're cute.
Update soon :)

June 24th, 2012 at 07:14am

fearless-forever (100)

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I don't think this will be the last they see of James... :)

June 24th, 2012 at 04:52am

RebeccaT (100)

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I love this story so much lol and I like missy lol

June 24th, 2012 at 04:20am

All About Lovin' You (105)

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Comment swap bought me here, and I am SO glad!!! Your story has drawn me in and I'm stuck to it like that spide web that was stuck to me this morning (lol!! sorry, bad joke).

To be completely serious now, when I first started reading this, I was like "errr, this is kind of boring". I am sorry for judging based on the first chapter because you proved me wrong! Once things started to progress with Ver and Mr Reed, I started to dig it. THEN when all the supernatural kind stuff came in, I couldn't stop reading. Seriously, job well doing at coming up with this plot. Really wasn't what I was expecting. Love it, and can't wait for more!

June 22nd, 2012 at 12:22pm