Love if, Michael and Darcie met and realize tht they r related without having the DNA test say so, I'm glad tht Brian and Darcie made up and apologized, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
That chapter was beautiful! I'm glad Brian and her some what worked through their feelings. I just hope it doesn't come to her Father wanting her to live with him and then she'll have to leave Brian. :( Anyways, great update!
Thank you for the comments. Sorry to you three and all my readers because I won't lie, I've been having a shit time lately and I feel my writing is slipping. As for the exclamation marks being overused, I apologise but right now I haven't had time to proof read my work. When I have more time I will change it, but like I said, my head isn't in this at the moment.
Sorry to everyone who has stuck by me and here I am being so suckish :(
This was a good update. I enjoyed it. However, certain sentences don't need exclamation points. I noticed that it seemed a bit over used. Just an observation. :) Looking forward to the next one.
I just love if, I'm glad tht she is back home with Brian and the boys, I just feel sad for Juan cuz he is waiting for Darcie to meet him at the bridge to realize tht she isn't goin to meet him and possibly never see each other again, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I love that Brian and Darcie are together again, and that Brian's being so sweet. She needs him around as she's not going to get over what happened so easily