Catching Teardrops - Comments

This was good. Everyone tends to have difficulty with sex scenes at some point. At least I like to think so...haha. As I said, this was good and I'm looking forward to reading the rest soon. :)

Lovvvved it

AWWW Juan!!

I enjoyed the update. However, I still notice that you are struggling with tense shifts. But it's okay. It happens. Just be careful with it. :) Looking forward to more soon.

I just loved when Darcie said It's called jealousy. Lol, I have no clue why, I just did. I'm happy that she finally got to see Juan. I'm also happy nothing happened that would of made Brian flip out on Juan. I had a feeling something like that was going to happen, but I'm glad I'm wrong. This update was perfect! Can't wait to read more soon! <3

Im surprised Brian stayed in the car that long....

I just love this story :)
Update soon
Great chapter
Can't wait to know what happens next
I'm a little sad it's ending soon :(

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! great chapter, and teaser at the end.

I think Juan is lucky that Brian didn't try to dismember him. Jealousy makes men do some pretty stupid things but getting him all horny and turned on worked a treat :-)

Love it, I find it funny tht Brian is jealous of a kid hilarious but I kno it's becuz he really loves Darcie, I like tht they got their closure even up Brian wanted to probably rip Juan to shreds, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Ugh I'm ready for it to happen!

Aw, that was really cute. I can't wait to see how it goes with Juan. <3

Please update soon!!!!

awe update soon love this

Love Jimmy, I'm glad tht Brian is goin with Darcie to go see Juan, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

AWWWW how cute! Love the update:)

loved the update

I love it :)
Update soon
Great chapter

Loved this. You still have tense shifting, so be careful on that. Otherwise, it's good.

Love it!! I wonder what the proposition is! Michael seems nice, i wouldnt mind him being in the picture as long as he doesnt ruin darcie and brian!