Thankyou very much ! I sure will ( :
March 18th, 2012 at 08:30pm
Ooooo I like this!
I never post stories anymore.. but I do read. Let me know when you write more!
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March 15th, 2012 at 04:45am
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@Luv YourSassyDreamer thankyou very much ! yeah , i thought the chapters should be quick and have cliffhangers :3
oh , i'll edit it and fix that ! thank you very much fro pointing that out , i really appreciate it !
@iiLov3Yuhh!! thankyouu for keeping up with the story ! ( : & haha , i know right !March 11th, 2012 at 12:53am -
Oh, whoa. I love the emotion that you've captured within Esmeralda, especially since it's third person and everyone says that it's so hard to do such a thing. Even though the chapters are short, I'm not going to complain. They're perfect length for the story.
Just a quick note, though: A new paragraph begins when a different character speaks. I only noticed this error once, in the first chapter, but I just wanted to make sure you were aware of it.March 8th, 2012 at 12:23am -
aw gosh, tht poor gurl.
god, he's so horrible.
i CANT believe he killed her one true love!
tht'ssad. no wait, evil!
i do not like tht guy! =(March 7th, 2012 at 01:55am -
thank you very much ( :
i'll try to update soon, but thank you, again, for reading & commenting !March 5th, 2012 at 12:46am -
Oh wow, I totally L♥V3 this alreadiee!
Gosh, tht guy sounds horrible.
Man, it sure must suck to be her.
Well, cant wait to read some more of this.
& hope u write more soon! =DMarch 5th, 2012 at 12:35am
