Bloody amazingly done. I enjoyed reading this, hope you decide to make it a two-shot. Though it might be sad to see him kill Brian, but it'd be amazing.
Wow. That was amazing!! :D I really liked it! No, not liked, loved it! Shadows is such a twisted bastard, but I loved him!! Thank you and good luck!!! :D
holy shit. first off i just want to say, thank you so freaking much for having such a beautiful layout! it makes me much more interested and excited to read. the story idea was just perfect, the whole idea of matt and his other side shadows was just, wow. i really, really (i know how sick minded i sound right now) loved the rough and painful sex that shadows gave misty, it really got me interested. and the ending line, wow, it left me wanting more! i'd love it if you did a story/chapter on how shadows kills brian i'm so glad that you entered my contest, you are a really, REALLY good writer! i love it!
Wow.....just....wow. This was one of the best one shots I've honestly ever read, let alone stories. I imagined that Matt would find out about her cheating and be pissed, but I didn't think he would actually kill her. Way to surprise and shock me. (in a good way) Loved this and I shall share it with my friends. =)