Cracked Dreams - Comments

I love the detail and how you describe the place she's locked up in. I think that every chapter is very well written and very detailed. I don't know a lot about avenged sevenfold but now that I have read this story,I might have to look them up! Keep writing and update soon please!!

Why didn't I find this story earlier?!? Holy crap this is amazing. I cannot wait to read chapter ten! Keep writing please!!

Omg I love that show 'Say yes to the dress'! Keep up the great work!!

Still love it update again soon :)

Okay, how the /hell/ is it possible that I only just saw this story today? That's completely unfair.

But you want to know what's even more unfair? Ending a chapter like you just did. Not cool, man; you can't even begin to understand exactly how turned on your writing made me, and then you just go and end it without letting any of us know what happened. I hate you.

But at the same time I love you, because this story has really captured my attention. I like the mixture of the obsession with the mob -- that's a mix that I actually haven't ever seen before... and of course I like that it's Zacky; he's my favorite. <3 But seriously, this is very well written, creative, and highly suspenseful. I can't wait for your next update; I'm subscribing and stalking this story even more than Zack undoubtedly stalked Lily.

Can't wait for the next update!

Holy Shit!! This story is really really good!!

Love this story. More please!! :)

Can't wait for another update =)

Love it! Update soon please =)

oh hey look first comment ;)
update. please..like..now
love it already, and if other people dont think so they most be on something <3
update ASAP pretty please