Time Bomb - Comments

love the story but i cant feel sympathy for her whenever something goes wrong. i feel like she puts herself into the position when she knows whats gonna happen and then she cries when it happens.

Aww yay, happy ending! :D

I knew he was going to do something stupid again. I loved it and I can't wait for more. :) xx

I was going to comment something whitty but the sheer amazingness of this chapter has made me lose the ability to think of a decent sentence

Noooo! Why Alex, why?!

I REALLY hope that you update again soon... I get so frustrated when I get into a story and it gets forgotten about... please please please ???

Bed-buddies. ;) haha. She's gonna screw him again before Jack and her sister gets out there. I honestly don't mind which two days you choose as long as you're updating. I've been looking forward to reading this story all day. I just now got to sit down to read and comment. I like commenting because it makes me happy that the writer is happy. Chapter was great, love. Xx :)

This is really good :D I just wish she would take back Alex tho :(

It's been awhile. You should try updating sooner. :) This chapter was swell. I enjoyed it thoroughly. :D

I would be so interested in reading the arranged marriage story!

Thank ya'll for commenting :)
& PhoebeAnna - I am SO in love with Captain America! haha.'
I kind of modeled Luke after him. Well him & Liam Hemsworth ;)

& thank you! I really think I want to do a sequel.
I love these characters too much to be done with them now.

Yes please! You need to do a sequel for this story (:

I'm not sure whether it's just because of the fact that I'm obsessed with Captain America that I love Luke, but I think that he should have more of a chance. Damn sexy soldiers.

More sexy time for Alex means also more sexy time for us to read. I approve!

I loved that last chapter, I think Luke should DEFINITELY have a chance. Her and Alex should not get back together straight away. He's a dick and always leaves her, so she needs to stand up for herself and not allow him to walk over her.
I mean obviously they should MAYBE get back together, but Luke is so lovely and totally deserves a chance :D
And i'll shut up now :P
I can't wait to read more to find out what happens, update sooon :) x

When I read that she had that something put in her to prevent pregnancy, I had to think of cows because I heard in school they do that to them too.

Again, authors are the biggest cockblocks ever!

Freakin amazing!

Ahhhhh! This was amazing! :)

This chapter is just igesongbpsbhorshnosnrnhsio drama eisgnietsbgesiobges...
And I also really hope your sister gets better, and I hope you're coping alright :) xo