Anyways, the layout isn't that important, but people usually give you kudos if its all cool looking and stuff, and as a pro maker of story layouts, I will help if you want the help :D
And the story. Ahhh. Fangirling so badly over her xD you have a very simple, straightforward type of story telling which is wonderful because some people tend to clutter the story up with unneeded details.
P.s have youu read the books??
P.P.S I have subscribed, so expect a comment from me every new chapter!