I liked the plot and idea of it. A lot. The ending was probably my favorite (NOT BECAUSE THE STORY WAS ENDING!) because you showed the witch's point of veiw for the first time, and it was wicked sweet. I also liked how you had shorter chapters and the story wasn't boring. This story is an obvious fantasy and I think that's what makes it so amazing. I think if you tried to make it any more realistic, the story might have been a little lost. All-in-all: Loved your story!
August 14th, 2012 at 03:02am