Everything's On Fire - Comments

I LOVED IT.
i'm glad you updated C:
i like that loriainne isn't all okay with john stepping out on her. she's got some self respect going on. i can dig that. i can't wait to see where this story will go. because i honestly have no idea. i can't wait for more c:

update!!!!

i like this a lot mhmm C:
i like the way you write, too.
the first chapter is just perfect.

I would really like to see where this story will go. But love it so far!
Update soon?

LOVE this story!!!!!