Mask Your Desire - Comments

Brian... I just I don't even know what to say to you... I'm I'm just gonna really hurt you... Just so you know... His is amazing, can't wait to read the sequal!

I'm gonna murder Stephanie!!!!!!!!!!

I wanna slap Brian for being so stupid!Poor Ashlyn :(

R u fucking kiddin me right now, how the fuck do u get her fucking confused for the skank Stephanie the bitch wasn't even fucking drunk, Ashlyn was hello I swear to god Brian u r an idiot when u r drunk u should have just sat ur ass down if u knew u couldn't stand up straight OMG I want to punch u and tht bitch in the fucking face and top of tht Ashlyn is pregnant and u don't even kno it nor will u ever see tht baby anytime soon u fuckin idiot and Stephanie I wish death upon ur future u fucking slut u had to trick ur ex into sleepin with u, thts pathetic build a fuckin bridge and get the fuck over it it's fucking over and I will be damned if Brian even thinks about dating tht bitch after she just made him lose Ashyln, can't wait to read the sequel :)

I really hope she keeps in touch with the rest of the guys and their girlfriends and gives him a smack in the face when he realizes how much he hurt her and that it's his kid. Dumb ass. I really just want to jump into my computer and ask if he even noticed that she hadn't been drinking. Ugh. Love it though and can't wait for the sequel.

@ iheartzackyvengeance
She hasn't told him because she found a retired prostitute in their bed!
I'm sorry! But Brian's and idiot! D:
And he gets worst! Ahem... Go check out the character section on the sequel and/or the summary ;)
Hehehehehe :3

Thanks for commenting ;D

Didn't see that coming! Stephanie is such a bitch! Bri has a lot of explaining and making up to do. AND WHY HASN'T SHE TOLD BRIAN SHE'S PREGNANT!?!? Can't wait for the sequel!

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Heads up to you all and whoever else that comments, that was the last chapter :)
Js. ;)
It's best you look out for the sequel :3

Brian is in big trouble!!!! I hope they can overcome this, they are made for each other!!! Update soon!!!

What the actual fuck?! Just.. I can't fucking even! >.< Stephanie, I'm going to shoot you, okie?

Uh oh, Brian's got some serious explaining and convincing to do. I think it's gonna take a major effort to get Ash to believe him. Hope he manages it though. Please update soon x

I agree that third person is would be easier. Ultimately, which ever you find would be better or easier. You're a brilliant writer, so I will be happy either way.

@ SynysterTiahne;;
I liked having the different p.o.v.'s but i feel if it was third person omniscient then things that happen can be explained and there aren't holes.

@ SynysterTiahne;;
I think Third person would be a bit easier, but whatever is easier for you is awesome with me!

I think is easier in third person :)

Whichever's easier for you to write it I will be fine by me. :)

If its easier, do in 3rd person. It'll be brilliant whatever you decide to do

@ SynysterTiahne;;
I think tht u should do third person

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A question for all you recent commenters, and whom ever else wishes to reply!
(it was easier this was >.>)
For the sequel, would you prefer it in first person, like MYD is, or as third person?

I was thinking third because jumping to and from POVs of characters a little doggy and choppy, but I want, and need, to include all emotions, thoughts and opinions of all characters in the sequel, even Ashlyn's parents, so yuh.

But I do not wish to change it on you all, unless you agree :)

So please comment, and thanks for the previous feedback :)

-SynysterTiahne

All my emotions.. So saaad, like you can just imagine their faces and yeaaah :( its also sad how Brian's trying to understand and be there for her, yet she's not opening up to him. Like, c'mon girl can't you seee that he'll be there for you?

Its ending?! Whaaa? Nuuuu, make a sequel! WAAAAIT, eye spy with my little eye I spot a sequel up in the top right xD

Aww so sad :(
Can't Believe this story is finishing :(