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ferberry29
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Thank you... i really appreciate it. ^_^
March 8th, 2012 at 03:38pm
SBurgundy
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First stories are always a toughie! lol but this sounds interesting, you might want to add a summary so people know what they're reading and you should space out your paragraphs.
Just helping out :) Keep up the good work!
March 8th, 2012 at 02:59pm
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