Sooo, actually just got back from commenting on another one of your stories, "I Hate You," and I'm still from comment swap. Lol.
I liked this one even better than I liked your last one (that I read.) Yay for dialogue! It was really sweet. And although you write short pieces, again, I felt like even in this small piece that I'm sure would be less than two pages on Word, I got to know Gerard better than I get to know a lot of characters in 10 pages. You're a writer of few words, but you use those words carefully and make sure each one has meaning. I like that. :)
It was short and sweet, and I really liked it. Great job!
I liked this one even better than I liked your last one (that I read.) Yay for dialogue! It was really sweet. And although you write short pieces, again, I felt like even in this small piece that I'm sure would be less than two pages on Word, I got to know Gerard better than I get to know a lot of characters in 10 pages. You're a writer of few words, but you use those words carefully and make sure each one has meaning. I like that. :)
It was short and sweet, and I really liked it. Great job!