Affliction - Comments

Comment swap brought me here. Wow, this really spoke to me. I feel lonely, and in pain sometimes. You captured the true essence of hurt, sadness, and more. I think you have a way with words. Also, I love that your chapters were on the short side. I have trouble reading a bunch of pages in one chapter. It really makes me not want to read the story at all. You are good at writing, and I would keep it up!

"You never truly know a persons story"
That needs to be "You never truly know a person's story"
You just forgot the apostrophe.

I like how each chapter told the story of a different character, but I wish we got to know each of them a little better, so we could see them grow and learn.

In the last line of the fifth chapter, you don't need the comma between friend and for.

I really like these. The panic and OCD ones are perfect (I struggle with both). I'd love to see you do one for agoraphobia, though that may be slightly similar to panic, as they go hand-in-hand oftentimes.
Please update soon!

I really like this. In some of these people can relate in some ways. There not too long nor too short. Just enough to pulll you in. More people should comment. Its really good :)

I'm the only one who commented since last night? How rude people! Anyways in the 5th chapter, I don't know if it was a typo or not but this sentence confused me a bit.

Laura, she's just a child, has hasn't lost her innocence

I liked it. One thing I would change though is the first sentence. I think the word should be something because not everyone experiences the samething........well all of us experience death and such but.........not everyone has had a disorder or something like that.