October 18th, 2016 at 12:11am
Layout + Summary I'm not too fond of the layout, but it's still readable, which means I won't turn away from the story. The summary is what made me want to read this. It seems rather interesting. I'm not huge on fanfics though, so I am hoping that this will still be understandable without having to know much about them.
Content This was great. For some reason I didn't even expect smut and yet the more I think about it, the more obvious it was in the summary. Besides that point, it was written great. I loved how it flowed and the pace was perfect. The characters were great. Nate was definitely my favorite of the two. He seemed so innocent but not innocent at the same time... if that even makes sense. Great job. c:
Content This was great. For some reason I didn't even expect smut and yet the more I think about it, the more obvious it was in the summary. Besides that point, it was written great. I loved how it flowed and the pace was perfect. The characters were great. Nate was definitely my favorite of the two. He seemed so innocent but not innocent at the same time... if that even makes sense. Great job. c:
Well, it's a good thing I wasn't drinking anything when I read the chapter title. Made made me laugh, then my drink would have gone all over my laptop. 
I haven't read a fanfiction involving him in some way in forever. -nostalgia- That was amazing! I think I am becoming slowly obsessed with your writing, not that you could blame me. Loved everything about it. As usual. 
The summary immediately drew me into this. The way that Brendon's obsession was described was enticing to see where this ended up.
As for the actually story, damn. I didn't know I needed to read this until I did. I don't normally read fanfic for Pan!c At the Disco since I wouldn't call myself a fan but this was amazing. It flowed smoothly between the two characters and I definitely think out of the two that Brendon was my favorite. I know this is an old piece but I would love to see more of these two.