You know, I began reading this as a comment swap, not usually fond of stories like these, thinking they're pretty stock standard love-lost kind of things. And for the most part, it was. But regardless of how I entered it, i actually found myself pretty captivated. And I don't even like stories like these. I can't really put my finger exactly on what had drew me in. I'm a male, so these kinds of things aren't things I relate to all too well, but I almost got a sense of time stopping when he notices the main character. This sense of everything else in the coffee shop freezing in place while the exchange played out. Definitely above average from the stock standard, so kudos.
May 5th, 2018 at 11:52pm