A Synderella Story - Comments

This is such a good story! there's barely any spelling mistakes, and really good grammar, you're a really good writer, well done, looks like you have alot of people intreasted in the story, i love the
idea of your story it''s really good! carry on writing!

I've come here from comment swap.

Sadly, this type of story doesn't interest me very much so I'll just say that I like that your summary isn't super long. You have little to no spelling mistakes and you have good grammar. Something not a lot of stories have these days so that kinda shows that you're a very good writer. Good luck in the future.

Well it surprised me to see what hapened to Ashlynn. I guess she didn't told him all the truth, but it shows that she trusts him. It's sweet that she accepted to help him for his class =) And he was so sweet when he started to be worried about her.
I really love the idea of your story and I look forward to your next update.
About things to read... I guess this story is pretty nice : http://stories.mibba.com/read/457269/Return-To-Me-My-Love/ Obviously it's about A7x. There's plenty of stories about them on Fanworks.org, I don't know if you already know this site.
Good luck for your writings!
Bye.

I like that Ashlynn's opening up to Brian, and I found Brian super adorable when he was asking her for help. ^.^ But I wonder what really happened to her ankle. The markings on her arm are a little concerning, but I doubt she'll open up to Brian about it. But I did like the update! :D

As for stories to read, I have a couple of A7X fics I'm working on, and you could also read Scream by Brian Haner Jr if you haven't read it already. :)

Awe, thank you for the shout out!!! And I like that Ashlynn is opening up to Brian a tiny bit. As for stories to read, the ones in my signature are both A7X stories. Trials in Life is a Matt and Brian- no slash- story that my sis and I are co-writing. Rockstar Lost is mine that I'm writing on her profile. So if you need something fresh, checkem out and leave me some feedback!! Anywho, back to the story, I liked this chapter and can't wait for the next update. And hey, I'll give you a shoutout on the next update!

Okay, sorry for not commenting in a while. I don't have internet until the weekends so it took me a while to catch up. BUT, I'm excited to see how this pans out because in a typical Cinderella story, the stepmother is evil, but in this case, she didn't seem evil in the prologue. So a bit curious there. I wonder also what is up with Ashlynn's demeaner. I mean I understand she lost her father but why be so distant and reclusive? I guess I'll have to wait and see!! LOL

So Stacey and Dan are together. I thought something was up when Stacey ordered for Dan, and now it makes sense. Now I wonder what happened with Brian and Michelle for him to say dating her was a mistake. :/ And to find out that the waitress was Ashlynn's stepmom just made me excited because now there's the possibility of Brian and Ashlynn running into each other at the tea shop. :D Great update!

Haha nice chapter x] So Brian starts to really like Ashlynn right ^^? That's cute. I loved the end of your chapter, when we learn that Ashlynn is the waitress' stepdaughter ^^ Update soon !!
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This sounds really good! Please more soon!

I love the font but the color is hard for me to read. They are getting a little closer! Love it please more soon!

I find it completely adorable that Brian's so nervous when he talks to Ashlynn. And I really like that Ashlynn isn't trying to push Brian away either. Loved the update! :D

I love the way you write it, and I like Ashlynn because she's different and mysterious. It's quite funy to see Brian so unsure to talk to a girl ^^
Dan seems to be a nice guy.
Keep up the good work ;)
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Love this. (:

It's getting good! Can't wait to see whats in store! More soon!

Loved the last two chapters! :D Your writing style is amazing. And I love the introductions to the two main characters. I'm so excited to see where you go with this.

Wow, I love it! More soon!

I love your writing style. It flows very nicely and it's safe to say I will be subscribing.

I'm crazy about this. The summary drew me in, and I knew then that it was going to be amazing. But I that first chapter was amazingly written, and I cried. So sad, especially when she was so young. I can't wait to see where you go with this story line. :D Update soon please!