Part of Me - Comments

This was cute! I wasn't expecting anything with how it turned out. It was sweet :)

I did not know this was about Bam Magera! (is that how you spell it? idk. sorry. :/)
It was so cute. aaawh. I liked that Una girl, and how you gave background into her Danish side.
And the fountain thing had me going "aawh." I think I say awwh too much. op.
One thing I noticed, though: “Oh, look! He’s wearing a tux! You too are perfect together!” she said, playfully grabbing at the bottom of my dress. I think the "too" should be "two," like, "the two of you." Or maybe not. idk. But very nicely written, ma'am. [:

Omg I love this!
I enjoyed how much back ground work went into it, like the Danish stuff!
Also it's funny because I do acually feel that way about my name ;P
I love the plot how it had a good story and how it was not all about Bam but had other charaters!
It was awesome thanks :)

Omg I love this!
I enjoyed how much back ground work went into it, like the Danish stuff!
Also it's funny because I do acually feel that way about my name ;P
I love the plot how it had a good story and how it was not all about Bam but had other charaters!
It was awesome thanks :)