A Little Piece Of Heaven - Comments

The characters are developed really well and the death of Jimmy really got to me. Overall though, you've got a really awesome writing style and the plot line seems really awesome and solid.i'm not noticing anything grammar or spelling wise, and i like how you've got these relationships built; I think Taylor is right for being worried about being hurt again but, Johnny admitting he was wrong and he acted irrationally also shows how much he really does care about Taylor.

First of all, huge Avenged Sevenfold fan! but really your character development is quite strong, it really builds a connection between the story and the reader. The storyline you've created is also very compelling. The combination of these two things makes for a something really special. keep up the great work!

Hi there! You've probably heard this before but your "OC" is actually a real dude, you know, Taylor Hawkins the drummer of the Foo Fighters? But aside from that, this story is really awesome! Keep it up!

Yay! Avenged Sevenfold! Thank you comment swap!
I love this. I really do. I'm glad comment swap sent me here.I cant find any flaw in anything! Dialogue is pitch perfect, the story is so engaging and keeps you interested, and the layout is beautiful. I can't offer criticism because there isn't any to offer. I like what you did here, so good job and Congrats. You made some random reader very happy today. ^_^

so i feel like an a-hole for not reading/commenting on how well you're doing with this story! there's only a couple of things i found wrong, and they're mostly spacing/small grammatical errors. so far i think it's pretty great (:

I like the simplicity of the layout, and how the plot revolves around trying to mend old friends relationships. It's a somewhat change from the other stories like it. I do like how simple the story is, however. You do have some grammatical mistakes and it would be nice if there were more details to it.

When I saw the title of this fan fiction I smiled almost instantaneously because I have recently come to love reading Avenged Sevenfold fiction! I got really upset when I was reading about Jimmy, but I guess that is to be expected! I really, really love Taylor's character - it's a pleasant one, y'know? I think your plot is really original which makes a refreshing change!

I agree with the girl under me.

The layout is pretty but there's no need for two images in it.

The characters are developed really well and the death of Jimmy really got to me. Overall though, you've got a really awesome writing style and the plot line seems really awesome and solid.

the summary needs to have a question mark at the fourth paragraph, as it's definitely a question :) i like the layout, but i would say to resize your second banner and of the like. also,r eally, use one or the other- the two banners sort of makes the whole thing look messy. i'm not noticing aything grammar or spelling wise, and i like how you've got these relationships built; taylor's character is the bomb. so sad about jimmy tho, that's just one of the worst things to read in fic for me, about his death and all.

Hey, I found your story on comment swap, and right away saw that it was A7X, and was hesitant. I’m not a huge fan of their music, and honestly have never listened to a full song of them, so I didn’t know if I was going to be a good reader for your story. But as soon as I read the summary, I knew I would like it. Right away, the summary had you pulled in, and you wanted to read more. To start off with a not really important note, I really love your background. It was simple and went with the story, and didn’t take away from the story. Right away I was drawn in, and really like your story. I didn’t find any real grammar, spelling or other mistakes, and the only like. Two found are simple things that can be found with looking it over once or twice. I subscribed already, and really enjoyed it, and you made it so you didn’t have to be a huge fan to be able to enjoy your story, which I really appreciated. Overall, I thought it was a really good story, and I subscribed, and I can’t wait for the rest. Good job. 

First off I really love the layout and the banner your friend made you. I think Johnny really cares about Taylor and its sweet how there for her he is. The gang all really seem to care for her and it was kind of funny with the ‘Yes, Brian, even you.’ I think Taylor is right for being worried about being hurt again but, Johnny admitting he was wrong and he acted irrationally also shows how much he really does care about Taylor. The whole scene with the camera was pretty funny and so was the kiss when Taylor and Gena were fifteen. The fact that Johnny wants to take her on a date is really sweet. I didn’t think Taylor would be the type to really put up with the abusive crap. Angry, protective a7x boys kick ass. The flashback was really cool and so was Johnny’s anger toward Anthony. All in all this has the potential to be a really good story so, keep up the good work.

aww Ciara I love it, it's so beautiful <3

Aww soo cute xD

I love this so far! c:

Aww i hope she is okay :(
Update soon

Interesting story so far :)

Awh...i loved it!! ^.^

Hi, this is great! I was a bit sad about the Rev thing, but otherwise its pretty easy going and furious. There are a few gramatical errors, but whatever. :)

This story is pretty cool :D cant wait for the next update!!

Love this. (: