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  • literallyfuckoff

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    *screams from the rooftops* BREEEEEEAAAAAA! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?! first off, i cannot tell you how excited i was to see that you updated this i almost thought it was a dream. :D hahaha! now i repeat: WHY, BREA DARLING, WHY? what kind of cliffhangin' mumbo jumbo?!? THEY KISSED! FINALLY! BUT WHY JUST LEAVE IT. i mean, yeah, i probably would've left it there too, but now i NEED chapter eight ASAP. like, i needed it yesterday. morning. the fictional tension is so thick i could cut it with a knife oh my god. and you still write teenage jimmy perfectly. this story is so effin' perfect i almost cannot. she needs to ditch kyle and get with jimmy. oh, speaking of ditching :( sloan wouldn't even give jimmy the time of day #sad BUT NISHAY IS AND THAT'S GOOD AND NOW THIS COMMENT IS JUST A LOT OF RAMBLING AND NO REAL POINT OTHER THAN I'M GOING CRAZY FOR CHAPTER EIGHT AND THEY JUST NEED TO MAKE OUT OR BANG OR SOMETHING. oh & ps. this update has inspired me to go back and try my hand at writing jimmy fiction again :)
    March 29th, 2013 at 06:28am
  • MoMo_92

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    @ gatesguardian.
    Pretty awesome :)
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:52am
  • adam driver.

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    @ MoMo_92
    haha. i figured it would be more interesting and less predictable if she made the first move. :) glad you liked it!
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:35am
  • MoMo_92

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    Poor Jimmy becuz he got rejected by Sloan the girl tht he really likes but his manwhore ways got around the school and she heard them so yeah she is goin to say no, umm holy crap Nishay kissed Jimmy wasn't expecting tht at all I thought it was goin to be Jimmh to make the first move not her and now she is doubting her relationship with Kyle which is a good thing becuz it means tht she doesn't really belong with Kyle I mean the kiss with Jimmy was electric unlike Kyle's, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:04am
  • adam driver.

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    @ mrs.stiglitz4207
    awe! thank you!

    i miss him too. it's definitely weird that he's gone.

    i am actually planning on updating this tonight! haha. i don't want to make it a fast story but i'm not 100% sure what i want to happen just yet.
    March 27th, 2013 at 01:05am
  • mrs.stiglitz4207

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    Hi!! Got this off the ol' comment swapper.
    I really enjoyed this story. The layout makes me tear up a bit. I really miss The Rev, soo yea. Sad day:'( I love the realtionship between Shay and Jimmy. And sexy talk is always so fun;) i really enjoy the flow of this story and the way its devoloping. I agree with the commenter when they said if the story goes too fast it will be over, and i dont want it to end. At least not yet i want to read more about these characters and cant wait for the next installment:)
    March 27th, 2013 at 12:24am
  • iusedtoprayeveryday

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    HALLELUJAH. When I saw this update in my emails I got so excited.
    Seriously... Almost known of the stories that I love are updating - which sucks...
    And one of my favorite authors hardly ever updates anymore. And my #1 favorite doesn't even write anymore.
    I'm starting to lose faith/hate this website. Especially now that they have all of the little spin-off sites. (which I hate)

    ANYWAY... wow. Lunch date with Jimmy and Shay. All I can say is: thank God. Things are finally happening. But I don't know if I want them to happen slower or faster... because than this story would end. :( Keep it up, girl!
    January 4th, 2013 at 04:26pm
  • adam driver.

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    @ MoMo_92
    haha, thank you. she needed something for shock value.

    @ Marshall Eriksen
    i'm glad you were excited! Smile it had been far too long since i had worked on this story and i had more than enough time to do so during christmas break. i am still undecided on where i want this story to go. i have a few ideas, but i am just unsure. i didn't plan on it being a full-length, like breaking the rules/pact, so i think it'll be within 10-15 chapters... i don't know though. blah!

    @ TheGoodLlama
    you're welcome. thanks for the lovely comment!
    January 3rd, 2013 at 10:35pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Yay! Thanks for the lovely update. Loving the sexual talk hahaa
    December 30th, 2012 at 07:00am
  • literallyfuckoff

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    And people say I'M good at writing Jimmy. Brea, this story is seriously flawless and I cannot tell you how excited I was to see that you updated! And if I may say so: I think Jimmy would think you capture his teenage self pretty damn well :) I'm glad that you chose to update today.

    Now onto saying what everyone is thinking: NISHAY NEEDS TO DUMP HER BOYFRIEND AND GET WITH JIMMY! But if you did that the story would be over much too soon and we cannot have that. I feel like I told you the same thing in Breaking the Pact... Hmm... Anyway, I hope you had a Merry Christmas as well! And I can't wait for the next chapter ♥
    December 28th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • literallyfuckoff

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    And people say I'M good at writing Jimmy. Brea, this story is seriously flawless and I cannot tell you how excited I was to see that you updated! And if I may say so: I think Jimmy would think you capture his teenage self pretty damn well :) I'm glad that you chose to update today.

    Now onto saying what everyone is thinking: NISHAY NEEDS TO DUMP HER BOYFRIEND AND GET WITH JIMMY! But if you did that the story would be over much too soon and we cannot have that. I feel like I told you the same thing in Breaking the Pact... Hmm... Anyway, I hope you had a Merry Christmas as well! And I can't wait for the next chapter ♥
    December 28th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • literallyfuckoff

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    And people say I'M good at writing Jimmy. Brea, this story is seriously flawless and I cannot tell you how excited I was to see that you updated! And if I may say so: I think Jimmy would think you capture his teenage self pretty damn well :) I'm glad that you chose to update today.

    Now onto saying what everyone is thinking: NISHAY NEEDS TO DUMP HER BOYFRIEND AND GET WITH JIMMY! But if you did that the story would be over much too soon and we cannot have that. I feel like I told you the same thing in Breaking the Pact... Hmm... Anyway, I hope you had a Merry Christmas as well! And I can't wait for the next chapter ♥
    December 28th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, tht was an interesting dinner date, Jimmy my man Nishay has the hots for u and it's ridiculous, I laughed when he said tht he fucked her best friend can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 28th, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • disneyland.acid.trip

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    ASDFGHJKL! This is amazing! You put so much detail into each chapter! I spend a while writing my chapters, and there no where near as long as yours! I'm really impressed with this! It's my new favorite story on Mibba; officially! Update as soon as you can! I'm dying for more! (:
    December 9th, 2012 at 12:19am
  • bri.iero

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    @ gates guardian.
    Okay good because I'm way too anxious!
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • adam driver.

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    @ bri.iero
    i will try & update asap! :) i am going to try to go back & forth between stories.
    November 28th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • bri.iero

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    Okay I finished getting up to date on bat country and now I'm reading this and I'm up to date with this. I may very well DIE if you don't update soon!!!! Gah I love it!!!!!!!!!
    November 28th, 2012 at 12:34am
  • James_Moriarty

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    Such an amazing chapter :)
    I love the tension, it's making me freak out a little to be honest
    I think Jimmy's beings tub born because he's afraid that he'll cheat in him like his last girlfriend did, not because he hates he like he says :P
    November 15th, 2012 at 11:12am
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    @ Marshall Eriksen
    i know! it has been soooooooo long. & for that i am sorry!
    November 15th, 2012 at 10:25am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, poor Jimmy can't say anything right without hurting people's feelings or gettin grounded, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 15th, 2012 at 10:15am