The Exception - Comments

I haven't read any Avenged fictions before, so this was a little weird for me. But this is actually a pretty good one. Sure, the idea isn't entirely original, but it is still pretty well written. I only read the first chapter, but I can say that it is a very good story so far. But I think when you put - “sea-had; genus species - oceanis witchicus. The fact that she’s either a harlot or an ice queen only makes it that much more humorous to us ‘pussies.’” - you meant to say sea-hag, not sea-had. Just thought I'd tell you.

-Greg.

I haven't read an Avenged high school fic in so long, but I have to admit this looks interesting. The writing is to the point and I rather like that. The banner is just gorgeous along with the layout, so kudos for the writing and the layout! You might want to check for spelling errors though, I think I might have spotted some. Keep up the good work though!

Jimmy is soo badass i love it....Jimmy slamming Kyle's face into the locker was pretty hot becuz it shows tht he can be really aggressive ;) anyhoo what the hell is up with Nishay becuz I honestly think tht she is trying to hook up with Jimmy after the incident with Kyle lol can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yay for progress.

Asshole got only a fraction of what he deserved!

This story is fucking amazing! Thanks for the update :) Next chapter is going to be bomb

OMGEEEE i am in love
you are an AMAZING writer!!
more plzzz

oh snap.... XD still loving this! can't wait for the next chapter :D

I started to read this and subscribed and everything
but when Mibba broke, it destroyed my subscription!!
so glad I found it again, i was laughing so hard!!!
Love this soooooooooooooooo much :D
*Resubscribing

Seems really really interesting so far...There's just one thing really really disturbing.....the background. I'm not sure if I'm the only one, but the weird background distacts from the actual story, it actually gives me a headache =/ Just thought I'd mention that....Otherwise, I love it so far and can't wait for more =)

I have so many favorite parts mostly:
"Bitches love jimmy's dick"

hahaha I died

DAH, I love it. Jimmy is funny. :) And you're good at being him. It's nice to see how you would write as Jimmy. Since we don't get to see him in BTR.

This was me whenever I saw the e-mail.

This is good! ;)

This is so great!

LOVE this

I don't see many Jimmy stories around and i'm a Jimmy girl /:

This is so well written and so clever I loved this part especially:

"Jimmy, you kiss every girl you meet. What does that say?"

"I get pussy,"

LOVE IT!!

This is a really good story......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

it's 12:30am here and i had to refrain from squealing when i saw the e-mail update XD i'm such a fucking fangirl!! but you know me, i love your writing and this chapter was great! i really like how you're portraying everyone and the fact that jimmy's so smart is adorable (: i don't know why... i feel like that was a weird thing to say... XD but this story is amazing - REALLY AMAZING - and i can't wait for the next chapter! :D ♥

Keep it! It's really good!

Really good :) Can't wait for more

Keep it going please! 1 chapter in and I'm already wanting more, can't wait x