Just read this. I laughed out loud when Olivia said that she hoped he got picked dead last. And I loved the ending, with his reactions to her texts. They're both very witty. Awesome job!
I don't normally read stories about Couture. He's not exactly my favorite player, but I really enjoyed this story! I love a great balance between dialogue and discription and you had that. Great job and keep up the great work! :)