UGH! This makes me so sad to read. However, I think that it was beautifully written. I love the flashbacks to the best moments he spent with her. It's very easy to connect with, especially if you've lost someone close. Those who have know that sometimes you feel like you would do anything to be with them again, but it's not the right thing to do. I love that Liam is not above all those feelings. I feel like 1D is always stressing that they're just normal people and this is a perfect testament to what they're always preaching. These boys are just like everyone else. I loved the way you wrote it. Good job!
June 16th, 2012 at 09:38pm
