October 20th, 2012 at 12:12am
Whatever It Takes - Comments
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Ugh update omg <3October 19th, 2012 at 06:47am
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@ Never Good Enough
Thats when I was updating on my phone but thanks and I will try as soon as possibleOctober 16th, 2012 at 02:00am -
You have some minor spelling errors:
In the first two chapters you have u instead of you and r instead of are. It's not a big deal just something I noticed.
Also you used loose instead of lose. I see that mistake a lot, so it's nothing horrible haha :)
I really like your story so far and I'd really like you to update it :) Romance with a cop is kinda rare in slash so I like it xD haha Please update when you get a chance :)October 15th, 2012 at 08:44pm -
@ AriaWithLove
thanks ari i love beck tooOctober 15th, 2012 at 01:10pm -
Oh my glob! I think im in LOOOOVE with Beck! :)
hes like so sweet! I just want to hug him and squeeze him!( i love ben more)
:D
I like(love) the new chapter! :)
<3October 15th, 2012 at 07:31am -
Hey! Hey! Hey! Ben Bruce(my LOVE) is not a douche!!
:DJune 20th, 2012 at 08:48am -
OMG you updated, with an amazing chapter <3
I was missing this story, but it's back! Update again soon please(:June 14th, 2012 at 11:53pm -
I've never heard of Asking Alexandria, so I read this as if it were an original fiction piece, and I must say I was rather impressed. You've created some really interesting characters. They all seemed fleshed out and relatable. Your story line was interesting and well thought out; both of those are always commendable traits. I didn't notice any obsessive grammar or spelling mistakes. All in all, it seems like a pretty awesome story.June 13th, 2012 at 06:57pm
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Omgomg you're back! Brilliant update! I love Beck so much, poor guy needs to cheer up even though all the bad things that happened. I love his rebelling/teenage attitude <3
Was so nicely written:)June 13th, 2012 at 11:44am -
I don't even know you but you need to finish this!
Its sooo good! I looooove it! :-)
XDJune 7th, 2012 at 04:20pm -
Ur not gonna finish this are you Sam?June 5th, 2012 at 12:26pm
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Ohhh, I like this! I'm glad i read itApril 2nd, 2012 at 07:55am
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Love the new chapter! Poor Jon though. D: But Beck shall find love! I hope:)April 2nd, 2012 at 07:10am
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Amazing! <333April 2nd, 2012 at 01:20am
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I cried!April 1st, 2012 at 10:48pm
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Omg. This is just too awesome! Hands down for the original story line. And I love your characters already! I seriously fell in love only after 3 chapters!
One thing I'd say: sometimes it feels like its a lil bit rushed, or not based on reality. For example when Jon tells Beck his mom died, in reality that would be more tragic like Jon wouldn't have said that "Beck, why do drugs when you know you'll be put in juvie again?" Or when Jon and Beck were saying goodbyes and Beck asked why do I have to finish high school? And Jon said I don't know. Here, I'd except Jon to be more an adult and tell him cuz he needs to.
Omg ok. Sorry... Only that 2 things. But it's your story so yeah whatever you please :) and I'm still in love with the whole stuff. Anyway I like ur writing style, the describing of the characters, the original ideas. All in all: u did a great job <3April 1st, 2012 at 09:11pm -
Absolutely love it. Keep it upApril 1st, 2012 at 01:11pm
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I would fuck Ben!April 1st, 2012 at 08:41am
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its getting better....i cant wait for the rest <3March 28th, 2012 at 10:26pm
lol ill try to update soon