Caught Up In You - Comments

Love it!!! Please write more!!!?!?

Love it!!! Please write more!!!?!?

I stumbled over this story last night and I stayed up until 5 am reading it haha. It's really good so far. I have to admit that I'm not too fond of Pacey; on the other hand, I really like Drake's character. He seems so sweet. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update!

Love it, I agree with KaeBug can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Honestly she seemed happier with Pacey. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update(:

Pacey is goin to find out can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Well I thought it was pretty convincing can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I like Chapter 9 for the fact it gives us an insight into the relationship with Drew and her brother and I like the introduction to Austin BUT you're definitely right; have a look back over it and edit it. It's not the best chapter

Chapter 7 and still loving this. Just a couple of things I think you need to take a look at. Firstly, you can tell you're really excited about this story, and quite rightfully so, BUT you're rushing your writing as a result of this. You're using unecessary words here and there but the main thing is that, secondly, you keep switching between past and present tense. It's still a very readable story and, like I said in my previous comment, I'm obsessed BUT maybe once you've finished the story, just read back through it and you might see what I mean. I always go back over my stories and adapt/edit where necessary; it's amazing how you can improve it when you look at it with eyes afresh.

Just a little advice but just to reiterate; I love this story

Chapter 4: yes, I think I'm becoming slightly obsessed too! Once again, very well written. I love Drew and Pacey's relationship. It's believable and simple even though it's not meant to be

This is a great story so far and I've only got up to chapter 2. It's well written and different to a lot of the stuff on here. I've subscribed and look forward to reading more

Poor Drew but I'm glad tht she confide in Logan becuz she can trust him anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

It's goin to be dramatic, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

MOAR.

I LOVE IT
Yeah it was a little sudden but who gives a fuck?
She's happier with Drake so why the hell not?
Update soon!!

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Alexandra.
You made them have sex.
This chapter has made me very happy.

It's official Pacey u lost Drew becuz she is having sex with Drake right now becuz ur being a stubborn asshole and not talk about the situation, anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

It's funny because I'm in drew's shoes right now confused about her relationship. Of course I for have a drake but her relationship with Pacey is the same as mine. So reading this actually helped me lol. As always I love it when you update and I kind of hope she can say something to him that would hit home and make him realize he could lose her and he won't be able to get her back. Update!!

You've made me cry.

My mind is telling me to punch the shit out of Pacey and I just might do it like dude u really don't kno how to talk out ur feelings do u becuz not only practically pushed Drew to the point tht she hit herself on the wall but u didnt check to see if she was ok it's like ur emotions tht u had left as soon as u broke up with Drew, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)