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  • A S K I N G .

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    what!
    This twist has slapped me in the face D:
    But it's okay I guess I'll live.
    I still wish he would have gone with Scott but Jaime has to follow his own heart.
    This was a cute short story <3
    Nicely done.
    April 26th, 2012 at 06:08am
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    Ah okay, that makes sense.
    April 25th, 2012 at 04:00am
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    I really like this ! And omg omg I feel like bad stuffs coming up for Jaime D;. keep up the good work :)
    April 24th, 2012 at 07:37am
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    Now you've got me thinking that something happened once between Scott and Trent.. Makes me wonder.
    April 24th, 2012 at 07:16am
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    Funny how when a story feels so real it can make you take a look at your one life and stare out at all the questions thrown at you.
    I really like your story. I can feel myself being pulled into Jamie's life, and it just makes me want to continue reading to find out what will happen next.
    April 23rd, 2012 at 09:11am
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    I read this! :)

    I love the layout, it's so blue<3

    I like that Jaime isn't completely alone. He has his friend and from what I've read he has parents. I appreciate you not throwing parents out of the picture like most stories do. Sure you didn't''t say much about them but you said his Dad would have kicked that Douchebag out.
    April 20th, 2012 at 04:37pm
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