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I really want to read more of this story and see how things work out, I'm just curious about it especially because this story is about john o'callaghan and I'm pretty in love with him haha but yeah, please update when you have the time?

it seems like John does care about her but maybe he's just butthurt because she dumped her, because of his "ego" maybe haha but Rosa seems nice, I hope things between him and John work out

^hey, i'm really sorry i've not started this properly, but I really want to get some more done on my other stories. i can't wait to get it started, because i know i'll have fun with this story. but yeah, things will speed up soon and i have a feeling i'll like this story. oh, and thanks for saying it's amazing. hehe.

this is AMAZING, please update soon ))):

siiiighhhhh when will you start this properly???

^ I'm glad you like it.

I wasn't sure about this story when I first subscribed, but now that you've posted the first chapter I can say that I'm really loving this story so far. It isn't exactly helping my weird obsession with your writing though haha.

^Haha, I've always wanted to have someone make a legit 11:11 wish. Thanks though!

Yippee!!!!! 11:11 reference is so creative. I love the way this chapter closes with John wishing for a second try with Rosa... it sets the mood of what this story is going to cover. A perfect way to open the story :D

Update pwease?

^ SHUT UP ROBIN )):
actually dont, because you need to update

^go away michaela you're lame
joking ily

OMG! I forgot to say I was claiming first comment.. well i've got it now, so i win :D

^thank youuu, and well done on first comment hehehe

anyhow, awesome chapter!

ohhh and i can't wait for you to introduce rosa - she seems like she'll be really interesting! oh and the picture you have for her is gorgeous.

also i really like how sort of lazy and exhausted you've made john seem, it kind of suits him. like he's upset about being dumped but he's trying to play it cool and act like he doesn't give a shit.

ahhhhh this is awesomeeee. i love your writing so i'm really excited :D