You're Just a Daydream Away - Comments

  • Nanook

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    Hey girl, heyyyy...
    Okay, so.... I've had this story bookmarked for quite a while now. In fact, I'm thinking I probably bookmarked it shortly after catching up with your other series that I've read/commented on, since I love that one so much. :D
    This series is so cute! <3 I'll keep it present tense since it wasn't technically completed... bummed about that. :(
    I loved how the first two installments played out; like, Liz's experience with Alex was definitely a cliche, dream-like situation... and then it actually was. Then, with this third installment, it all matured in a way, and their relationship felt more natural/not so much as "Oh, what a coincidence." Well, I mean, other than her conveniently interviewing them for her radio station, but that was literally the only thing in this installment. XD And they had to meet again somehow, right? So why not give an ode to the cliche that the other two installments had.
    Their relationship was definitely more sincere in this third installment as well, and I'm not sure if it's because your writing maybe improved, or again, if because it was more reality-based, but... I felt the love more between the two characters and it was just really sweet. <3 Although maybe it also happened considering the dream and all they "went through."
    So, this last installment had to be my favorite, because again, their relationship matured and I just also feel your writing matured a lot by the time you got around to this one, as should happen naturally. But I love how they both had the dream, and if you ever do find the inspiration to continue this someday, I wonder if you'll come back to that aspect and maybe explore it more: why it happened, if there's maybe some sort of universe-based fate involved, etc. So many different avenues you can look at in regards to why they both had the dream. Heck, it could give you the ultimate conclusion to the story, just to wrap things up. It would make everything come full circle.
    But anyway, back to the story/series itself... I just, loved Alex and Liz's relationship. :) It was so sweet, and then in this installment, they had a son and that just upped the cute factor. :D Another reason I really liked this installment, haha, because they started their family. :)
    Along with the dream thing maybe needing further discussion, there's also the factor of them finally getting married and maybe a full resolution to the Andy/Kyle/her mom situation. Her mom didn't come back in this installment, which was probably a good thing, but... that's something you could work with if you ever choose to continue this.
    So, yes, I really enjoyed what you had of this girl. <3 Was not disappointed. I actually might go back and read your other series I checked out first, again? I've been in a kick of re-reading my favorite series on here, so maybe. :D I also noticed you have a few other Alex stories posted, so I'll probably check out those at some point as well, since I loved this series and your other one.
    And yeah, wanted to leave a comment to show you you will still have someone leaving feedback if you ever find yourself continuing this. <3 And of course, still thinking about your other story as well, I miss that one too. :'(
    Hope maybe you find the inspiration to continue this someday, even if it's just a final chapter wrap-up or something (although I would definitely love more of Alex and Liz's adventures if you're inspired to continue more than that). If not, at the very least, hope my comment put a smile on your face. Hope you're still getting on here girl. <3
    I'll be here. :)
    March 10th, 2018 at 07:06am
  • sierraye

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    Finally another update! Love it! More updates soon pleaseeee :)
    October 11th, 2012 at 11:56am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    Sooooo cute and adorable! :) good job!
    October 11th, 2012 at 04:36am
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    @ KidsFromYesterday182
    Ben is just a random guy that showed up at their front door. It'll make more sense next chapter
    September 8th, 2012 at 04:37pm
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    i forgot who ben is..... who is he....?
    September 8th, 2012 at 03:38pm
  • sierraye

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    Finally another update!! I loved it so much <3
    July 28th, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    I did. I know I'm reusing an idea but I couldn't think of anything else! I'm sorry. I'm open to ideas!
    June 7th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    Didn't you already have him cheat in the first story....?
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:59pm
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    I was thinking of doing something like that! I couldn't remember exactly what his brother's name was because I've heard it was Daniel, Ted, and Thomas. But thanks for the suggestion!!
    May 8th, 2012 at 02:00pm
  • RockPrincess16

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    I think you should name the baby Thomas William.
    Thomas because, of well, Alex's brother. Give the story a more sentimental and sweet feel you know?
    May 8th, 2012 at 04:45am
  • elliegaskarth

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    i really like it :) is it landon?? :)
    April 25th, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • PhoebeAnna

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    I think picking a day would be great! It'll give me something to look forwards to :) as long as it doesn't affect you or anything hjewiwshbed
    April 25th, 2012 at 09:09am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    normally i think picking a day to post is good but i like this story so i say you should just update like all of the time :p hhe
    April 25th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    Hey guys!
    I'm working on the next chapter right now but I was wondering if I were to post this weekly, what days would you want me to post? I was thinking maybe like Monday and Thursday or something? Let me knoww.

    Thanks again for all the love for this story! Hearing that it's your guys favorite story is always awesome to hear! It also puts quite a lot of pressure on me so that's why it takes a little longer for me to post new chapters. So keep commenting! I love your feedback and input!

    Love & rockets,
    Liz
    April 23rd, 2012 at 04:18am
  • PhoebeAnna

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    Ooooh, drama :3 sorry though, I can't help you when it comes to ideas :/ maybe Andy tries to get it on with Alex at a party or something?
    April 16th, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    i love it in just alex and liz's POV. :D
    April 4th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    Working on the next chapter right now! Not gonna lie it's pretty good and you guys might get mad at me for a little bit. Sorry in advance!
    March 30th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • Wendy.

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    I cannooot wait for you to update again!
    I agree with the other commenters, kind of.
    When I found out it was a dream I almost screamed NOOOOO! at my computer screen.
    BUT I'm SO glad you did a sequel. I love this storyyy<3
    March 30th, 2012 at 07:04am
  • PhoebeAnna

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    ooh, are you saying something else happened with Liz and Andy? Mmmmm, I'm intrigued.
    March 29th, 2012 at 09:59pm
  • lizwadmangaskarth

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    Thank you! Im gonna try to update more often guys! I promise :)
    March 29th, 2012 at 03:16am