Love, I'd Never Hurt You - Comments

im reading like all of your stories :)

Haha, you're my friend and I was TOTALLY going to read this.. until I saw there was 25 chapters.. Then my gumption kind of killed itself. But we all know you're an amazing writer, so keep going :)

I love this story. It's so twisted and beautiful. I love everytime I see that it's updated! :D

I was wondering when Gerard would start to see Frank as an open target for Jimmy.

Jimmy's feelings are conflicting me ;~;

Ahhhhh!

That is all.

<3 This is Epic. I really enjoy how you word things, and the way its going. my only suggestion is not to repeat yourself so much, repetitiveness is an authors enemy. Good luck!

My guess is that Gerard gets caught up with Frank and forgets about Jimmy, making him careless. Then Jimmy kidnaps Frank or some shit.

I'm totally freaking out right now! It would be cool to add to Gerard's problems with an investigator on his trail or something. Yeah, I've been reading too much Sherlock Holmes.

This is a nice story to read in the middle of Spanish XD

*throws bowl of cereal across the room*
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I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF NOW.

Why must you do this? I usually don't get this upset when a past lover dies, only when it's Frank or Gerard. You capture the emotion perfectly and Frank's character is already very well developed.
You still make me sad ;~;

I think Gerard shouldn't know he's the best, like brush off compliments. And it'd be more interesting if he always killed people with more personality. Like, up close and personal, like they were his step dad because that's where the killing started.
But I really like this so far :D
Sorry for reaching in your pants and stealing your comment virginity