Lover's Dance - Comments

Weeeee love this storyyyy.
Please update soon :)

Squeeeeeeeeeee. Aw this is so cute! update pleaseeeeeee D: <3

Awe! I'm proud to recommend your story!
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Hello, hello, hello. Le comment swap sent me here. I never see any actor fanfics. So this was quite refreshing. The only movie I've seen him in though is Hunger Games, which was an awesome movie. As some quick constructive criticism, please double space between the paragraphs. It kinda makes it hard to read, as it all seems to blur together. But I mean the detail, plotline, and character development are incredible.

Lol Lori is cool.
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I found this through comment swap and it didn't really interest me. I dislike Josh Hutcherson and The Hunger Games, but that's my problem, not yours. You write with a nice amount of detail and you should be proud of this, well done. Also, I love the layout.

Mibba's comment swap feature sent me in the direction of your story! I am really sorry to have to say that I genuinely have no interest in Josh Hutcherson at all and therefore, for me, this was like reading an original fiction. That said, it was really well written and the plot is one beaming with original ideas. On the whole, the spelling and grammar is very good! I really like your writing style too - the narration is lovely and easy to relate to. Really well done! :) xx

More More More!
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I hate how I always end up sounding all formal and shit.

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I hate how I always end up sounding all formal and shit.

Chapter 11: panicked* also, a few lines of dialogue later "repeated" has an extra 'd'
But yes, excellent work

D'aaaww ! This story is beyond amazing, and I love how real the narration is. This has the coolest mixture of everything awesome and I like it quite a lot ;) Fantastic writing, keep it up ! xobryn

I'm enjoying reading this and I hope you continue writing it.

Oh god. MY HEARTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.
Please update! :')

Oh my god, this is the best story ever. I mean like, ever. ngersigtrgyer

First comment yay! lol.
Well I haven't even read this yet but I really wanted to comment before I began reading to let you know how freaking happy I am that I found A Josh H story...like literally two minutes ago I was looking through the story for some fics about band boys and I was thinking "hey why isn't there any josh stories, josh is hot, I want A josh story!" and I was even thinking about asking someone to make me one but then I see like a story with a freaking amazing song as the title and what do you know Josh H is in it! lol so im gonna go read it now...I bet it'll be amazing....!!!!:D