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  • eric halvorsen

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    Why are all your stories so perfect? They're all so wonderfully written and have such nice characters and story lines and just yeah, they're perfect. :3
    October 3rd, 2012 at 09:32am
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    Why are all your stories so perfect? They're all so wonderfully written and have such nice characters and story lines and just yeah, they're perfect. :3
    October 3rd, 2012 at 09:32am
  • SmallWonders

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    This was.... This was just utterly beautiful. I don't really have any other words besides those. This was just one those stories that completely blow your mind and it's one of my sincere favorites of yours. Wonderful. Truly wonderful.
    July 27th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • H. S.

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    So beautiful, adorable, and artfully written. I absolutely loved writing it.
    June 14th, 2012 at 12:14am
  • Unexpected.

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    That was adorable.
    I was seriously surprised when Daniel raped him. Wasn't expecting it at all. And then Erik. He's like a wonderful boyfriend. Person, really.
    This might be weird, but when Eli was talking about how he'd loved Erik but then got with Daniel and then forgot about his feelings but then they came back, I totally related to that perfectly. You love someone, and then the feelings are masked for a little bit, maybe if you or them have a boyfriend/girlfriend, but then as soon as it's over the feelings hit you like a freight train. =\ I understand that perfectly, unfortunately.
    But anyway. One of my favorites of yours, :)
    I would say its up there with Don't Speak, but that one's my ultimate favorite, as you may know. It's close though so that's a good thing (:
    April 22nd, 2012 at 07:57am
  • silent bones ;

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    Ow God, I felt like crying when Daniel that sonofabitch raped Eli. That’s just so utterly cruel, inhuman and all those bad things :’( I wanted to fucking stab Daniel and then rip out his members, slash his tongue, burn his skin and just damn straight drop him on acid!

    But then there was Erik and he’s just perfect! *-* It really proves that even when bad things happen to us, life can still show us a smile along the way. Erik was like a piece of sunshine after the storm Daniel created and Eli’s safe harbor. That’s why I think this was beautiful, because, even though things aren’t always as we expect them to be, there’s always gonna be something better waiting for us. No matter how cliché this sounds (‘:

    Wonderful, really :3

    <3
    April 20th, 2012 at 08:27pm
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