Imagine - Comments

I like this story! Update soon :)

update soon!!!

Update ffs! XD

OMG!! I'm hooked, continue this soon! c:

I like this - and score for getting Val onside to make the guys pay a bit.

Wonder how long it'll be before Matty boy tries to make a move again :-)

CHAPTER ONE:

Again, spelling and grammar are good. Only typo I found was "three month" as opposed to "three months". Otherwise, it's great. ;)

I feel like this chapter moved a little bit fast. Not always a bad thing, but it feels like (for example) after she found out she was going to be working with Avenged she maybe could have taken some personal time to think about what that was going to be like. To wonder if they've changed, to wonder if they chose her specifically so they could keep making her life hell, etc. Just a little something to get her mind racing.

I like that they didn't recognise her - that makes for an interesting twist. And the way that she's playing dumb, the way she knows exactly what will irritate them - perfect.

And she has quite an interesting plan - I'm definitely excited to see how you make that work out. ;)

Overall, a good start. Can't wait for more!

xoxo
HJ.

PROLOGUE:

Here for the constructive criticism. ;) This was an interesting start. I assume that chapter one is set in present tense, where the summary starts us off. So it was nice to have a brief look at her past. And I feel like with just this one glimpse, you've told an entire story of how her life was like in high school. So good job. =)

Spelling and grammar are fantastic. Off to read the first chapter.

xoxo
HJ.

I like this story already
I just don't get how they can forget someone who's life they made a living hell
But thats fine she gonna make the matt's life bad I can already tell!!!

Evil plans. Me gusta ;) aha

Interesting, Gonna keep an eye one this! :)