August 4th, 2011 at 09:23am
A little cheesy, but very good. You're descriptive skills are amazing, really. It wasn't like "Oh my Ray, gag me with a spoon" cheesy, it was just the right about of cheesiness.
You really did do a fantastic job. Really, I'm totally blown away.
Love isn't a sin, but this was such a great fic; it's almost a sin :)
-- Bliss