Messy - Comments

Woah this was graphic. The only problem was that I wasn't repulsed by it and I feel like I should have been. I think if you'd perhaps described the blood and the disfigurement of the bodies more I would have been. Similies and metaphors and all that! Otherwise I was left pretty curious by this chapter. Is it to be the only one?

Really graphic. It's not really my thing, but I don't regret reading it. Everyone needs a little gore once in a while, and serial killers really fascinate me. I hope there are more chapters with a characterisation of the serial killer first hand - his psychological make-up and whatnot.

It's official, I'm in serious love with this story. Update soon please!!!!! :D

I love how graphic this was!