The Song Remains the Same. - Comments

....so jimbob is a stalker? BUT IN LIKE A REALLY CUTE WAY? A WAY WHICH MAKES ME SQUEAL AND GET VERY EXCITED???

PLOT TWIST

why is she waiting to talk to riff about it when clearly the only logical option is to jump his creeper bones?

Duuuuude I love this story! The OCs are just great. :) I like how there were a few chapters of exposition before anything major happened between one of the girls and the band: a lot of the time in fan fiction an author will rush right into the romance and it kinda aggravates me, lol. So I like that you focused some of the chapters on background first. I also like how you depict the boys' personalities as they seem to be spot on. I like the budding friendship between Veronica and Riff and I REALLY WANT ROBERT AND RIFF TO HUMP.

that's it. Update now!

*comment swap, btw* I really liked this story, it was really well written with great vocab. I think it's great because it really shows what kind of lifestyle the people we look up to are living, even if we try and ignore that (I've always been like that) Really great story, please write again soon! :D x

Awww! Thanks!!

YOU ARE MY FAVORITE PERSON ON MIBBA. YOU WRITE ABOUT THE BEST SUBJECTS EVER. GOD BLESS YOU.