Over Spring Break - Comments

I really liked this! I don’t normally read hockey things but this was good. I haven’t read the prequel yet (I’m about to now) but I felt like I had a pretty good grasp on what was happening so I think you did a good job with that. Overall, it was great. I could picture everything in my head clearly and I really liked David a lot. Great job :)

Cute! The sisters are adorable :)

awesome chapter !

Loved it! I was a little surprised by the pregnancy. I can't wait for the day that David get's called up.

So cute! Can't wait for an update :)))

I am glad David is ok with the pregnancy and it sounds like Jon has found someone too!

I love the saying on the sign...signs that have meaning behind them are always my favorite. Can't wait until David's reaction to seeing the sign!

I love the sign - cant wait for David to see it.

dun dun dun...What is going to happen!?!? Update soon so that I know.

I lovvvvveeee comments. Anyways, I'll update first thing tomorrow!

I love how different your story is its not like all the rest.

Glad I found the sequel - I made sure to subscribe.

Harper seems pretty up for a single girl who had to give up her sport because she is pregnant. I guess it is better than wallowing.

But it will be interesting when she finally gets in touch with David.

ohhh i can not wait to see Davids reaction!!

I love how different this story is from all the other stories I read. I wonder how David is going to react on being a father! Update soon!