One Life - Comments

  • Minnesota518

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    This is so sweet! I loved the story line and it was really well written!
    April 28th, 2012 at 09:05pm
  • LDW Choice

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    Alright, I want to start my judging by saying, I know nothing about One Direction. Oh, and I'm automatically increasing your point total by 10 for being in before the deadline.
    Anyways, I feel that you met every requirement to the absolute T. Your grammar and spelling are fantastic, so easy. Creativity, don't even get me started, because it was that amazing. I've never read a story that starts one place, goes back wayyy in time, and than progresses with such ease. It amazed me how much ease this story flowed with. And of course, you received bonus points for having it emotional, descriptive, original layout, and relating to the contest. Congrats on 90 of 60 points!
    April 4th, 2012 at 03:08am
  • charlie smith

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    AW, this was so cute (: I swear it feels like you have the boys' personalities spot on!
    March 24th, 2012 at 06:23am
  • OneErection

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    Awwwww
    March 20th, 2012 at 11:44pm
  • ILoveNiallHoran

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    I love this!
    You should make a full story based on this! :')
    March 20th, 2012 at 04:30pm
  • swell

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    Reading this was so adorable <3 My favourite part was when Harry's like 'I'm going to spoil you rotten'. I can so imagine him smiling his cute little dimples and me being AW!
    March 20th, 2012 at 11:24am
  • dawn of light

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    LIKE THIS! :)
    March 20th, 2012 at 09:24am