My Immortal - Comments

Poor Amy, Matthew deserved what she did to him. u_u Can't wait to see how he'll act form now on! Ha! <3

This rocks so keep going :D <3

LOVED THIA CHAPTER!! hope u update soon!!! :)

Okay I finally read it all! Matt you're an asshole! ¬¬ Seriously ...
More! :DD

@ SevenfoldGirl_
Okay :3

@ FaBzShadows
Try another internet.. Google chrome? I use Mozilla Firefox and it works :)

@ SevenfoldGirl_
No I know it's short, but I can't see half of it DD: I don't what's wrong.

So Matt is trying to explain something he might have done on purpose? Wow.. I'm kind of hoping for something hook up or date related from Amy at this point. Kind of like, her seeing there are others out there interested in her and all that.. Hmm.. Good chapter.

@ FaBzShadows
How do you mean? Where does the chapter end? What part? Because it's pretty short this chapter :)

Hey something's wrong with the layout, is like eating half of the chapter! >.<

OH HELL YEAH... great chapter. I want to punch Matt in the face and I seriouslly would love a sequel but I loved this story... congratz :D

OH EM GEE NO. I really thought Amy would go up to him and slap his face. Gosh what a freaking douche. And what you mean with "the end"? NOOOO CAN'T BE! Anyways, Evanescence is finally born YAY PERFECTTT. More? Pretty please? With a cherry on top? Or a strawberry

In chapter 1 you should fix the spacing for paragraphs and dialogue. Just thought I'd let you know. :)

Matt was a real douche ! i mean.. he says he likes her and then he went kissing other girl... hope she doesn't get hurt more than she is now.. and, this was an awesome chapter btw! i loved it, i can't wait for the next :) hum.. how will Matt react if he finds out tha Amy saw him with that blond girl... i think he was too busy for noticing Amy performing tho..

you demand? psst.. now you'll never know what I think of this chapter! muhahah! xD JK.

so she just needed a push to perform? well.. I guess there's a positive after all to whatever the hell is Matt's deal... I wonder how he's reacting to knowing that Amy was at there as well? unless he really was way too busy.. hmm..

good joke at the end and good chapter.

THE END??? THEEEEE EEEEND????

I was hoping to give matt a gibbs'slap for being a bitch!! hahahahahahahahah DAMN!!

Aja du varnade mig för att ja inte skulle tycka att han är söt länge till.. asg!! Men Papa Roach & Evanescence rocka fett <3

I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I CANT BELIEVE ITS ENDING BUT I HOPE U MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait for the nxt update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was amazingly good. <3

Oh my gosh. I love it so so much. Matt is a douche but I'm glad she joined the band. I hope this isn't the end or if it is that you make a sequel.

it cant be the end lol sequal or update soon