Accidental Penpal - Comments

  • Faydflowright

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    Wow!@! this is like ... amazing girl!

    York is liek such a hottie.
    July 18th, 2012 at 04:22am
  • MusicLover525

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    aww! How cute! Love the idea! :)
    I'm glad everything turned out right for the both of them! This story really got me addicted and I was reading an hour and a half non-stop! So now it's 10 pm and I really wanted to start studying at 9 pm but your story distracted me.. :/
    I'm going to blame you if I fail my really important Physics course test...I don't even know why I chose Physics in the first place.. -.-
    May 6th, 2012 at 10:02pm
  • totalli_okie

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    This story has touched me and I haven't even finished it yet.. I guess it's because my best friend and I live states apart and have never even met. This was a very creative and ingenius idea and is very well written!!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 05:19am
  • madman21

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    I love this sooo much! So original! Who says a story plot has to be in a novel/novella/short story form? letters? Amazing idea! There are a couple grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing that takes away the meaning!
    Your characters are really well developped and I'm guessing thats especially hard to do since you can't show us their actions.
    Thsi story goes against my one rule for writing; show, dont tell. But you have twisted it and twisted it and it works which is amazing.
    You should be proud. Not many can pull off a story like this. I hope this gets the reads and subscriptions it deserves.
    April 21st, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • xxErika411xx

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    It's sad that this story is over. I've never read a story like this one before and I really loved it especially how they were writing letters back and forth even if they didn't know each other at first but at the end they got to know each other really well.
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:32am
  • fearless-forever

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    I love this sooo much! I will definitely read the sequel!
    April 21st, 2012 at 04:51am
  • kelly09

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    I love your story =)
    April 20th, 2012 at 05:19pm
  • xxErika411xx

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    It's sad that this story is ending. It's great that Kendal went back to school and that York and Aaron opened a music store. I can't wait to read the sequel.
    April 16th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • fearless-forever

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    Awwww! So cute, I'm so glad he saved her.
    April 4th, 2012 at 12:24am
  • xxErika411xx

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    Aww I'm sad that it's almost going to end. It's amusing how he didn't correct her about his eye color when they were originally green and not blue.
    April 2nd, 2012 at 11:09pm
  • misery7mannequin

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    Nooo! He must save her! I must know what happens.. I'll be waiting.
    March 31st, 2012 at 07:33am
  • Synderella28

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    Save her York!!! Ahhh!!!
    March 31st, 2012 at 03:54am
  • fearless-forever

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    AAAH!!! Save her York!
    March 31st, 2012 at 12:34am
  • xxErika411xx

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    I hope that he does stop her and explains to her why he didn't write back earlier.
    March 30th, 2012 at 05:41pm
  • kelly09

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    Please upload soon! I love it =)
    March 28th, 2012 at 10:04pm
  • misery7mannequin

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    Aww. I hope she gets his letter soon, though. I feel bad for her, poor thing. But, what's life without a bit of drama to make it interesting, I suppose. Good job! =)
    March 28th, 2012 at 08:53am
  • Synderella28

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    I love this:3 keep writing, this is really good! I hope Kendal and York end up together when he comes home. That 'd be awesome...
    March 28th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • xxErika411xx

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    It's sad that she thinks that she blew it with York if only she would have turned back to check her mail she would have maybe seen his letter.
    March 28th, 2012 at 06:10am
  • fearless-forever

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    It's so sad... :'(
    March 28th, 2012 at 05:53am
  • fearless-forever

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    Knew it!!!!!!! :D
    March 27th, 2012 at 01:23am