Beside the Dying Fire - Comments

You're writing is incredible! Hope to see more in the future!

dude.

PLEASE update this soon! i miss it sooo much.

i've never seen TWD before, and i've never read a fic of it before! but this made me want to! subscribed!

There is so much I need to say about this fic. First, you should know that I have never read a Walking Dead fic before, but I am so glad that I decided to come out of my closet and read this. It was wonderful! Second, I'm only two or three episodes deep into the show and haven't gone back to watch it sense then, this fic really makes me want to go back and watch it. I probably will, after I do some more writing and reading. But less rambling: this was fabulous and honestly, I'm totally in love with the fact that you have three parts posted and Rick hasn't appeared yet. You gave a great intro on what was going on with the girl and her community without thrusting it all in one chapter, total bonus in my eyes. I'm a huge fan of the banter between her and Jason as well; I think every story needs a character like Jason just because. He's like the comic relief all the while being the reader's scapegoat. I can already see myself wanting to strangle him in the future just because he has a loud mouth and will probably make more stupid decisions that will make me roll my eyes and bang my head on the desk. There was also a nice simplicity to this that I enjoyed, and of course the fact that I knew/understood everything despite not knowing anything past the first two/three episodes of the show.

Wonderful! Please continue! :)

Holy crap you had me holding my breath during the last half of the chapter! It was brilliant, and your character is so witty and independent, it seems, I love how she's so put together despite what's going on.

Great update :]

Another update? Aaahhh.

For this particular chapter, I loved the dialogue between the characters; especially between the speaker (does she have a name yet?) and Jason. She's so witty and quick with comebacks. It made me smile quite a bit.

A visitor? Hm... I have an idea as to who it might be, but I'm going to keep it to myself until the next chapter, because there's like a 90% chance I'm wrong so. xD.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep the quick updates coming, m'dear. <3

Yes! Update! :D Great chapter, I'm really glad to see this up :]

YAAAY. ^_^. That's what I said when I saw you updated. Lol. I'm excited to see who this character is that's narrating in the second chapter, as well as what startles said person awake. :0
I'm glad to hear you're really motivated to write this now, too. Hopefully that means updates more often?! That'd be amazing. Haha. Can't wait for the next one!

Ahhhh update this soon, please! I thought I commented before...but maybe that was on your profile? OH YEAH. We were talking back and forth and I mentioned this. I remember now. Haha.
Anyway, I love this. And I love the banner & layout. Both are quite amazing. As is the actual story and I can't wait to see where you go with this. ^_^.
Again, update soon, please! <3

Oooooo, I like this. How you wrote it was very descriptive and Rick-ish. And you left it on this little edge and now I'm like "WHO WHO Til WHO SHOWED UP?! TELL ME!" So, I will eagerly await an update. Also I got the first chapter of the Daryl Dixon fic up.

Wow! That banner is amazing! :D I love this already :3 Can't wait for you to update it! :D

First off, I love The Walking Dead, I absolutely can't wait for the next season. Second off, your writing style seems to flow, I didn't have any trouble reading it nor did I have to read a sentence over just to understand it. Third off, I'm excited to see where this goes. Rick has to be my favorite character. Good job!

Banner and the layout is to die for! Plus I love The Walking Dead.

For an intro - you've caught my attention. I want mooooreee.
I'm subbing and going to wait patiently for an update c:

OMG I love the banner. The Walking Dead is my favorite TV show. I can't wait for the new season to start.

:)