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  • jly94

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    Ahhhh, yay!! They are all dead and, more importantly, Dan's alive!!! I was incredibly worried there though!!!

    Loved this story!!
    Jen xx
    July 20th, 2012 at 12:19am
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    Still so intrigued by this idea!!! The section at the end of this chapter about fighting for your favourite band is brilliant and something I think a lot of people will be able to relate to.

    I am slightly concerned that something bad may happen, and if it happens to my Daniel I may have to cry!!

    Any way, you have kept up the suspense and yet again left me eager to read more!!

    Jen xx
    June 18th, 2012 at 11:48pm
  • KiddoOverload

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    liiiked it!! :D there was a couple of spelling aera in the end else, it was good!! :3 LET THE FIGHTS BEGIN! :D
    June 18th, 2012 at 07:12pm
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    This is fascinating! Such an original idea, I have never seen a fanfic like this. I love how you build the suspense in the first two chapters, not revealing why they need the girls or what they are until Alex bites Kiddo. One small thing, read back over the last two chapters as there are a couple of typo errors when you have been typing 'Dan'. Other than that, I can't wait for more :)

    Jen xx
    June 10th, 2012 at 10:20am
  • KiddoOverload

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    OoooooOOooooh!! I LOOOOOOVE THISS!! :3
    and.. I'm goooddd!! xD haha more pwease it was good :)
    June 1st, 2012 at 06:04pm
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    AWWW HE LOVES ME!! : D
    well written, more please :3
    June 1st, 2012 at 07:06am
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    UHHHHHHHHH!! EXPLAINING HE DIDDD!!
    I would still slap him across the face <.<
    more please :3
    May 9th, 2012 at 07:16pm
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    Ooooh. . meh like :3 more please xD And it cant be over yet!! :(
    May 3rd, 2012 at 01:01pm
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    Ooooh. . meh like :3 more please xD And it cant be over yet!! :(
    May 3rd, 2012 at 01:00pm
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    I KNEW IT! AND HE BIT ME! THAT SON OF A BITCH! loll :3
    more please :)
    April 20th, 2012 at 08:28pm
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    omgosh...

    HE'S A VAMPIRE ISN'T HE?!
    MORE PLEASE!!!
    March 31st, 2012 at 06:40pm
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    Ooooooooooooooh! he's gonna be "busy" with me :3
    meh wanna know what kind of buisness xD
    March 28th, 2012 at 08:25pm
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    *sqeals loudly* SOOOOO LOVELY!!!
    MORE PLEASE :3
    March 23rd, 2012 at 11:39pm
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    ohmegeeeeesehh what the hell are they talking 'bout, me wanna knoow <.<
    more pwease :3
    March 22nd, 2012 at 07:02pm
  • KiddoOverload

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    YES! LIKED IT! AND FIRST COMMENT!! : D I know I said I would be sleeping but.. yeah couldn't :3
    subscribing and more please :3

    BTW when bands normally come to Denmark they play in Copenhagen, so yeah.. :3
    thought I would tell ya if you wanted to put it in under tour dates :)
    March 21st, 2012 at 10:59pm
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