sorry i take on a lot of fics at once don't pressure me for an update lmao i'm writing a tynick oneshot this second and i've been working on this update in between as well as taking drums/guitar and recording to send mixes off to a record label ok i'm sorry there's not an update every day
I can't even remember if i've actually commented on this story before but if I haven't, I really love it. They are the sweetest couple in this, I love it. I can't wait for more :3
Okay, first of all, you do not suck at smut! That was a hot scene right there. Second of all. Wow! The realism you bring to this story is incredible. I love all the characters you're supposed to love, get aggravated at the ones you're supposed to get aggravated at. You evoke emotions towards characters and you do it in a very subtle way. Very impressed. One con-crit, in Chapter Four you put "Vail" instead of "Val", that's it, nothing else. Magnifico! Ich liebt es! J'adore! Me encanta! Eu edoro a! Jeg elker det! Okay, I don't know how to say "I love it!" in any more languages so there we go lol. Subscribed xD