Clementine - Comments

This was a cute little thing. Just thought I'd tell you that I enjoyed it.

And ain't it wonderful when little story bits like this just come to ya?

Love the layout, the little drawing is sweet. I like what you're trying to do with the repetition, it works really well in that last sentence but sounds kind of awkward in other places. I think this is a really sweet story, I like that it's short and simple but it has such a deep meaning to it. Growing up isn't always what we imagine and I like how you portray that. :]

As you probably know, I'm in loooove with your adorable little drabbles. And this one has to be my favorite of them all. It's just so cute and innocent; Clementine seems like such a free spirit and from only 162 words, I already like her character. You've said so much in so, so little. And this drabble really rings true to me, as I've done so much in my life, but yet, have done nothing at all, almost. Anyways, this was beautiful, Jazzy. Lovely job! <333

This was cute, a bit melancholy and simple but very well written. I like the name you chose for the character, it's original and sweet.

This is really pretty despite how short it is. I like how you mentioned all the things she's learned and all the things that she hasn't. It's really cute. I like the last line in the author's note. It's kind of wistful. As we get older, we've learned so much but there's still so much out there that you can't learn unless it's through experience. Clementine seems really interesting. This is lovely.(:

I really enjoyed this, even though it was short! It was really relatable and I thought it had good examples of things you'd learned to do. Good job :)

It's short and sweet. I liked it. :)

I like this. It's very sweet.

It's pretty interesting. I like it. Simple and leaves the rest to the imagination of the readers. It's good. :)