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@ discoveringclouds
That's the mystery behind the story. What's a dream and what's really reality. I might be updating again today, so check back again later for more. ^__^

When he was going to propose to her.. He really should have. I mean seriously what's with kids these days... They do everything before marriage. Get bored. Then get married as a formality?

So strange.

This story is interesting.. I have no idea what's sleep and what's not though...

Okay, the first thing I have to say about this story is that please, please get a new layout. I've seen this one used so much I'm genuinely fed up with it, and I had to switch to the default layout (which is actually horrible too... oh well).

Anyway, sorry for starting in such a negative way, I actually do like the story. I like how you have so much attention to detail in your descriptions (especially the line I only wish the mood marched the weather, I don't know, I just thought it was amazing) and I really like how you've managed not only to start off with something unresolved but also to heighten the sense of mystery throughout the story, it really kept me intrigued. Can't wait to see what happens ^^

So I am intrigued and need to know more! I need to read more! I love stories like this!
But There is something about Alek I don't trust..
Update soon! :D