The Distance Can't Haunt Us Anymore - Comments

Really cute :) Good use of description an emotion too :) I'm subscribed x3
Only thing I noticed was you called James' eyes ocean blue in the beginning then brown later on, but still it was really good :)

Got another one of your stories in the comment swap! I'm not familiar with this fandom, but you definitely wrote this well. You did a great job of showing how much Ben cares about James. I'm also glad that you went a little into Ben's back story and showed where his insecurities came from. This is a great little piece! Keep up the great writing!

Oh, man, this pairing is fucking awesome. I was actually considering writing a fic myself :3 I haven't read a lot of these, but this is hands down the best one. PS, it was pretty fucking sexy too.

If I can offer a bit of constructive (CONSTRUCTIVE) criticism, though, I think the part where you explain about Ben would fit better at the beginning of the story. Oh, and I'd be careful with the tenses too - I saw some past tense in the middle of the present.

I still absolutely loved it though :'3

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!

You should make this into a story!!! :D Please?!?!?!? <3<3<3<3<3<3

Awwww, this is amazing how they're so caring and gentle.
:']

That was SO sexy *______*
And I love how you used Ben and James. 2 utterly. sexy people xD