Bliss - Comments

Aw the second chapter was more than adorable. I feel bad that she miscarried, did I miss something? I don't remember if her miscarriage was in the first chapter or something. It was sudden to see that she did miscarry, seems to be moving a little fast but hey they were together in the first place. It's a little vague so there are questions that are left unanswered but it was a good chapter overall.

This story sounds so adorable :) It has been a while since there has been a good Dave Franco story if there is any including mine which was postponed XD I do have to agree, Dave is the hotter Franco there is just something him that pulls me in, maybe it's his smile and his carefree nature. James is a little too serious for my liking but my taste always moves around haha anyways this just makes me curious as to how this is all going to work out. I figure it's going to be up and down more than half of the time with them. It was pretty fast pace seeing that they love each other already which is cool I just wonder how you are going to extend it in a sense to make it great :) can't wait for the second chapter