Don't Go. - Comments

I love the amount of details you packed into each chapter. I could almost see everything unfolding before my eyes as I read. I really adore your writing style. It's very simple and not overly descriptive -- just right. I particularly loved the second chapter because the way you conveyed Jamie's emotions was just... impeccable. Everything was right on and I could relate to him in every way. Your choice of words is beautiful. Fantastic work! Keep up the great writing!

The description was very powerful, the emotion and the way every little detail was, is just mind blowing and amazing. You have an amazing talent for detail; the story is so emotional and sad - but it delivers a very powerful and well thought out vision. Your story is amazing, and you have an amazing talent for writing. I hope to read other works of yours, this one really blew me away. Keep up the great work!

oh man this tore me apart. i may or may not have shed a few tears at the end okay but that's a secret!

the length was perfect, i think. each chapter had just enough in it, and three was the perfect number for this. i loved how we only find out how he died nearer to the end, i don't know why, it just works really well. <3

I cried so hard! It was so depressing, but amazingly beautiful. I swear, this line: "I'd gotten used to the lack of heartbeat a long time ago." in chapter 2 killed me. It made the story so much more realistic in the fact that he was in fact imagining Danny. I subscribed, and I love it. Sorry it took me so long to comment. The winners to the contest should be posted soon (: ♥

This is amazing. It made me cry though:)You're a very talented writer I must say.

I will make the first comment!

OMG AMAZING!