The Boy From Across the Tracks - Comments

Writers block hmm? You could have nick come and visit and have him have like a little intervention with him about what is going on and like the voice of reason and tell him how he needs to break up with Amber if he doesnt like her anymore and that he needs to do things that make him happy and have him like see the light or something you know?Or..Or even better! -- Kaleb could try and sneak into the hospital and visit him when no one is there and then when he is like..holding his hand and crying and telling him how sorry he is, or KISSING! or something..(; and then either one of the dads or Amber walks in on them..that would cause a whole bunch of drama and then a lot of different scenarios to run with! Idk..you said ideas so i just shot some out! Idk..i love this story so you should update suuper soon!

I quite like this, update soon?

Wow this is really good so far :) Good Job! :D
So...when poor Chrissy was getting beat up...I was like, "KALEB WHY AREN'T YOU GOING ALL SUPERHUMAN STRENGTH-what? That doesn't happen in realistic stories? Well...dang..." Hahh, write more soon! *Chris should definitely try and fix the problem in the back...something don't remember what it's called...anyways, he should find a way to make it better! Although...you were probably already thinking that....well...*SUBSCRIBES!* :D

Many things I want to happen.
But the one I want to happen the most is, chris coming outta the closet.

I really can't wait to see how this all turns out because they're so different from each other but I'm sure they could be happy together...

Interesting sequel.....Quite attention grabbing with the drama and the mind sets of a depressed child....Must have more....Please update quite soon....

I love this story.. It needs an update!!! Pleaseeeeeeeeee! I will cry if need be. Please don't let me cry. Continue this amazing story!

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Nooooo! You have to continue!
I fresking love this story and I will not let you not finish it
:)

I love this story, like, a lot. Please continue!

i loooovee itt!! Dont not continue this story it's like heaven(:

*extra magnificent* lol, speaking of grammarical errors...

heyo. pretty swell(lol) story you have so far :)
a concern that I have though, by reading this story and the prequel, is that there are very few fluctuations in rising and falling action: it'll bring out your climaxes and make them extra :)
you also have the occasional grammarical error but that's a simple fix with a little editing.

Hey I love this story!! Please dont delete

Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!

poor chris...
update soon though! I love you for the quick update!

Psh 3 comments is more then I get! Better not delete

I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL!
>_<
They're just ass's

Please update!
:)

scuse you gimme that chapter