HOLY SHIT I ACTAULLY CRIED. Thats hard to make me cry with a fic, but oh my god this reminded me so much of my Grandad when he died I used to wear his aftershave and his jackets. I loved this so much, I'm honoured to have you in my contest!
Oh my god you are just such an amazing writer ;_; I love this so much "“My tenders!” Jimmy cried out as he held onto his groin as if that would help ease the pain there while Matt and Zacky nursed the punched to face that came suddenly." Made me giggle and the part where Jimmy was like "Man down!" Oh my god *dies* I just fucking love your writing so so much and I'm super glad you entered! I'll be judging the entries soon, I promise :)!
Oh my god you are just such an amazing writer ;_; I love this so much "“My tenders!” Jimmy cried out as he held onto his groin as if that would help ease the pain there while Matt and Zacky nursed the punched to face that came suddenly." Made me giggle and the part where Jimmy was like "Man down!" Oh my god *dies* I just fucking love your writing so so much and I'm super glad you entered! I cannot wait for the last chapter. I'll be judging the entries soon, I promise :)!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
Whoa this certainly is a twist!!!!! And I don't think I've read something like this before but either way I really love it!!!!!!!!! Poor Dani! She has to go thorugh being 'Daniel' for her mom. And the big question is what exactly is going on with her mom!? And wow way to go jimmy! Gfellig dani up her shirt!!! He sure is a trouble maker! And poor zack and Matt! They got hit for no reason it was their fault!! But it was sure very hilarious!!!!!xD please put up the third part to this soon!!!!!and somehow I wish you conitued this beyond three chapters!!!!!
so she's a girl pretending to be a boy? did she have a brother? did he die? Why's she pretending to be a boy? does she want be a boy? i'm confused... it's a good story though :)