I really like it. I may have seen a mistake or two but hardly anything to fret about. The writing is really good. Though you, like me sometimes mix up the present and past tense but that's not too big of a deal. The characters are pretty lovable so far and I like them. So far it is pretty good and I like this story, keep it up! and have the most wonderful day :)
June 9th, 2012 at 10:24pm